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Coldfire 2nd Life

Joined: 14 Sep 2007 Posts: 51 Location: New York City
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 2:23 am Post subject: Chapter 1, Page 13: "Yes, Nutters" |
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And on top of all that, you might just be the same person you heard about in the good Doctor's stories for years. Oh Charlie, you've got some thoughts to sort through.
If he believes Livy, at least. And now I think he's just in shock. By the way, that skin in the first panel? So awesome and freaky!
And I never got to say it, but I'm so glad you're ok, Barb! And utterly amazed that you still put out a page this week. You would have been completely justified at missing this time. You are truly amazing! _________________ "I make mistakes, but I am on the side of Good," the Golux said, "by accident and happenchance. I had high hopes of being Evil when I was two, but in my youth I came upon a firefly burning in a spider's web. I saved the victim's life."
"The firefly's?" said the minstrel.
"The spider's. The blinking arsonist had set the web on fire."
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Kasti 1st Life

Joined: 18 Feb 2008 Posts: 7
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:20 am Post subject: |
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Not that I'm rooting for the bad guys but I hope this really isn't the last we see of Tychia because I really like her character...despite being a maniac fairy! Oh she looks totally EVIL on this page.
And I really feel bad for Charlie. I mean, if this all happened to me, I'd curl up into a ball or something even if my pet cat kept telling me to run. *laughs* |
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Strange Ian Neither Strange Nor an Ian. Discuss.

Joined: 28 May 2007 Posts: 365 Location: Drifting around the interweb...
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 3:07 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, Tychia is looking super-cool! I love the red in the first panel, it's a shame my head is so thick today that I can't make sense of it... Charlies silhouette is quite clear, but the rest, the red swirl... I'm just so tired I can't understand what I'm seeing!  |
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KEZ Itadakimasu!

Joined: 28 May 2007 Posts: 315 Location: Beneath stormy skies.
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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I believe that is Brimaz disintegrating. BWAH HAH HAH. Go Livy! _________________ "Find what you're following and chase it down."
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BarbJacobs Purple Lady

Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 376 Location: over the rainbow
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:49 pm Post subject: |
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Ten points to Kez.
I was a bit worried that it would be unclear what was happening in that first panel. But that is correct. Brimaz is 'disintegrating.'
This is one of those pages that I was disappointed with. I try to not let it get me to upset, but that's the way of we arty types I suppose. I'll always remember this as the 'car crash page' too, most likely.
Im looking forward to the next two pages however. I hope they turn out how I want them to.
No worries, Ty will return. That is 'RETURN'.
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Elle Head Administator of Poultry Affairs

Joined: 31 Jul 2007 Posts: 310 Location: Detroit
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:51 am Post subject: |
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Oh Barb.
I think Tychia is like my favorite now, and she's disappearing! But I thoroughly enjoyed her and her cheekiness. And those lucious lips! Fabulous lips! Be jealous, Angelina Jolie.
You just keep chuggin' along, with great pages, despite all the slings and arrows of outrageous misfortune. You're a real art warrior! _________________ This signature is a filler for a much cooler signature. |
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canterrain Owner of the Mighty Pen

Joined: 02 Apr 2007 Posts: 142 Location: Out of my mind.
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 2:12 am Post subject: |
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They'll be back!
Ty said so. And I believe her. She gets what she wants. >>
I like the page personally. It -did- take me a few moments to figure out what was going on in panel 1, but I think overall it comes through.
To me I really -like- how distorted Ty looks in that panel with Livy's ginormous razor sharp teeth. (ginormous is a word right?) It really adds an effect to the whole feel of what is going on. Which would be "What in the heck??? AHHH! I'm nutters!" <<
Can't blame Charlie for thinking that at all now can you? _________________ The meaning to life is *censored!*
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Strange Ian Neither Strange Nor an Ian. Discuss.

Joined: 28 May 2007 Posts: 365 Location: Drifting around the interweb...
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 12:38 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, yes of course! Silly me...
Poor Charlie, if he wasn't crazy before, he should be after that evening! |
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