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Elle
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 Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:36 pm Post subject: Chapter 1, Page 12: It speaks! |
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Ohhhh Livy, I love you even more! Take THAT, ill-spirited fairyfolk!
This is getting really exciting, Barb! I can't wait to see what happens next. 
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mevanova
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:39 pm Post subject: |
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Wow, Livy can speak, too?! She's not just a super-dog, she can TALK!
I agree with Elle - the suspense is killing me now!
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Krozam
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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Actually, I think she's communicating telepathically. Even if she could speak, I doubt she could do it that well with an arm in her mouth. 
Great page, as always. Excuse me for not posting anything constructive: my brain doesn't quite work at its fullest when I'm both tired and having a flu. -.-'
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Skarface
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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I'm with krozam, looks more like mind to mind comunication than the old sound n' stuff way.
The last three pannels are impresive in all ways, ligthing is just amazing, the composition is great and the narration looks like a cinema secuences, few times after reading a comic the're parts you remember more like a film scene than comic panels, this is one.
The only flaw, if can name that as a flaw, is that the upper half of the page looks a bit messy and looks less cool in comparision with the last three panels wich are close to perfection. |
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Aerin
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, I think its telepathically, like Krozam said, she does kinda have an arm in her mouth. Plus in the little blurb below the page Barb says she can communicate. I love everything about this page, especially Tychia slamming into wall! BANG! If you ask me CC doesn't look shocked enough to deal with Livy, but then again maybe he's all shocked out. Nice work Barb!!!!
What's really funny about this page is that while she's slamming fairy against wall and generally kicking butt I'm picturing Livy communicating to CC in some really posh English accent.......funny stuff.
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mevanova
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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I meant 'speak' in the telepathic sense, I was just caught up in 'HOLY DOGZORS, BATMAN!'.
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Strange Ian
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| Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Krozam wrote: | | Even if she could speak, I doubt she could do it that well with an arm in her mouth. |
Yes, don't talk with food in your mouth, Livy. It's not polite.
I didn't see this page until today, but I can not even begin to tell you how much I love Tychias squashed bug-look! Her red aura is also very cool, I love when you do auras, Barb.
I seem to recognize the piece of art on C/C's wall in the last panel, but I can't really place it... Is that something famous, or am I imagining things again? |
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Aerin
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| Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:29 am Post subject: |
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| mevanova wrote: | | I meant 'speak' in the telepathic sense, I was just caught up in 'HOLY DOGZORS, BATMAN!'. |
Yeah, I was going to do the same thing, but then I read Krozam's post, and I rephrased....
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Kasti
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I seem to have a "voice" in my head for everyone in this story except for Livy. Then again, I didn't expect her to communicate!
What you think it sounds like?
Maybe a little girl? No...that'd be creepy... |
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Aerin
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| Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:19 am Post subject: |
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posh english voice...that's what i thought......which is pretty funny. old english granny voice?
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Hagar
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| Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:20 pm Post subject: |
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Barb- you are my hero. Now more then ever. Why? you might ask...
Well, right bottom panel- the picture on the wall. That just made my day even more then big-talking-Livy. & BTL REALLY made my day...
You give the background dignity. That rocks!
Sorry I haven't said much- firs week in Venice (I'm dizzy from the boat rides...). Pictures will come soon!
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